Damion And multiman.exe

Name: Damion Kie
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 4'
Weight: 140 lb
Body type: Average
Eye Color: Hazel
Hair Color: Brown-black
Skin tone: slight tan
Clothing style: (Everyday type of clothes) Black short sleeve shirt under a red and black hoodie.
*Voice tone: Exited and full of emotion
*Usual Body Posture: stands high and ready. Usually very inviting.

Standing around 5'4" and 140lb. He has an average build, hazel eyes and black hair. He dresses is black and red shoes, Black pants with a black and red hoodie that is usually open. Under said hoodie is a normal black and red tee shirt. He normally stands tall and proud. Seemingly ready for anything.

Personality: He enjoys learning and people. He is a very outspoken person but values a plan more then thinking on the fly. He's very careful not to step on people's toes thinks that people's opinions are there own and should be respected. It would be very boring if everyone in the world shared the same opinions right? In a work setting he is extremely careful to do the task correctly then quickly taking his time to ensure the smallest things are correct. He can't stand a messy home or work place, everything has a space it should be there. He often helps the scientists at the lab keep there work spaces neat and tidy when he's not assisting them in any experiments they are working on.

PET Modifications: Normal looking navi Red and black color scheme matching the navi inside.

Chip folder a Cannon, a Shotgun, and a RageClaw1, (extra chip) Recover30.
Name: Multiman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Subtype: Summon
Height: 5'4
Weight: 140 lb
Body build: Average

Body type: Human square rectangle shape.

*Hair Color: Black with red tips

Suit Color:
Black with red stripes.
Headgear/Face: He has a cloth that in battle covers his face from nose down.
Armor: He has red shoulder pads and black boots that go up half way of his shins.
Boots and/or shin protectors: Boots that go up his shin about half way to the knee (from ancles)
Voice: Calm collected/soothing voice usually.
Body Posture: Tall ready for a fight.

Standing at a similar 5'4" and 140 digital pounds and an Average build. He has short ish black hair that is tipped red. His navi suit is black with red lines across it randomly (note the line pattern changes any time he jacks in or out or teleports). He has black shoulder pads and black and red boots that go from his ankles to about half way up his shin. During battle his face is covered from the nose down by a black cloth.

Personality: Calm collected kind of person. Keeps calm under pressure. If your in trouble just make more of yourself.

Navi Custom: Undershirt, +50 hp
Custom Weapon: Instead of using a blaster he throws kunai made out of energy. Charged shot is a shurican
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details.
Masters of legions of objects and tinkering, Summon types can call forth barriers, weapons, companions, or any number of other creations for their own use. They are masters at their craft, so the best quality Objects come from Summon types.

Passive: Mobilize: Summoned Objects have a one-use Movement action.
Passive: Self-Destruct: When reduced to 0 HP, your summoned Objects explode in a Nova 2 radius for (max HP)/2 damage. The summoner can disable or re-enable this per object as a free action, using direct contact. Objects consumed by triggering their Damage Method do not activate this ability.

Active: Masterwork: You may add 20 + (Level) HP to an object's max HP as a free action. This can not be used on the same object more than once. (Once Per Turn)
Active: Crafting: As a free action, create an Object with 20 + (Level) HP, Normal property, and with damage methods Throw, Knockback, Microburst, Pull, Gravity, and Telekinesis. (Once Per Turn)
Active: Shadow Clone Jutsu

Effect: Summon 8HP Object (8) Passive Movement (60) Passive 4null Attack (12)

Nerfs: Sacrifice 15HP (20)
Total Points: 80
Cooldown: 2 Turns

Description: Makes a clone of himself at the cost of some Hp. The clone can run and shoot. Straight forward really.
Heya, just some quick bits and pieces to help you get this shaped up and ready to go!

First off, you'll need to note what starter choices you're making in the registration; I can see you've made your signature, but until he's registered correctly and checked these things aren't official.

So, you'll need to note in the above post which NC part you're picking to go with your starter Undershirt from this list: HP+50, Shield, SetSand, SetLava, SetIce, SetSea, SetGrass, SetMetal, SetSolar, SetGlass, or ResetStage.

Next, you need to nominate which bonus chip you're taking, to accompany your starter Shotgun, Cannon and RageClaw; one from this list:
HeatShot, FireHit1,
Bubbler, AquaNeedle1,
CactBall1, RollingLog1,
ZapRing1, MaruBlaster1,
ShockWave, MiniBomb, AirShot1, Vulcan1,
Recover30, Barrier, Guard1 or PanelGrab.

Along with those choices, we need to neaten up your signature so that it's legal. Generally, the preferred style is to record the mechanical aspect of the sig in a string that defines everything it does, followed by the total point cost being invested, followed by the signature's cooldown. So, it might look something like this:

Shadow Clone Jutsu: Summon 8Hp 'Duplicate', Passive: 4Null, Shot-Type, Movement, 15hp Self-Sacrifice. (60 Points: (80Total, 60Pool/20Nerf)(2TCD)
Description: Makes a clone of himself at the cost of some Hp. The clone can run and shoot. Straight forward really.

Some notes I'd make about this, however: Generally speaking, hp amounts on objects, and damage amounts on attacks that are less than 10 are somewhat frowned upon. I don't mind it personally, but bear in mind that 4 damage is very negligible, compared to your basic buster, which deals 10 for a straight shot without upgrades, and the most basic chips, which rarely deal less than 40. Built like this, you would also still have 20 signature points left available to spend, from your start pool, since we recently increased the amount you have to start with to 80.

If you weren't planing to do anything else with them, you could, potentially beef up the effect a little bit, though doing so would increase the cooldown further. Given the upper limits in the 0-4 level bracket, that may not be a viable option. What you could do would be to make the numbers a little more rounded, and that might make people wince a little less, so you could make it:

Shadow Clone Jutsu: Summon 5Hp 'Duplicate', Passive: 5Null, Shot-Type, Movement, 15hp Self-Sacrifice. (80pts: 60Pool/20Nerf)(2TCD)

That would leave you 20 sig points to make something else with as well, if you wanted to.

That aside, I would prefer to see some more physical description for your operator if possible. Elsewise, welcome, and feel free to swing by the chat sometime soon, and we'll get you sorted out quickly ^.^

Good enough, approved. :MrProg:

Post your operator and Navi in the respective areas in Operator Profiles and Navi Profiles and link to those threads in your forum signature. Make sure to have your Zenny and BugFrags displayed in plain sight, as in outside of any spoilers.

Once you do that, you can post a thread in the Real World section to jack in your Navi for the first time and request your first virus busting battle in a Net World thread. Or you can take on a mission for some noncombat RP if you'd rather do that (not that there aren't combat-based missions either), or you can just go do your own thing.

Above all, welcome to the RP and have fun!