Name: Jeffrey star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has red hair,A brown vest and two bags of food in them Personality: He is a great leader.
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) His pet is Red with white trim and has wheels. It also has a special upgrade that allows him to recall his navi back to the pet if something happens.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Normal
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He has green body armor,A tan gladiator's helmet and two sheaths on his back. He wears bronze armor over that and his sword is Like A knight's blade.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: Knightsword
Signature Attack: Millenium Slash (He can only do this once every 10 hours but it knocks 70 HP off the navi and prevents any darkchips from being used.
I am adding one more thing
Bio His parents were killed by Dimensional area Darkloids,His greedy uncle usurped the family fortune leaving him nothing but his navi and pet. Now he sets out to right that wrong,Stop his uncle and get zenny and a home. He has no friends at all. His uncle banished him from his own house and destroyed his computer containing AntiDark programs. He tries to remake them but needs help. He thinks his uncle owns those Darkloids. With no friends or money of any kind and only his navi by his side he was orphaned.
My netop and navi
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You need more descriptions for both your Navi and Op's Appearance.
You need to have descriptions for both your Navi and Op's Personality.
Your PET mod is rejected. It give you a mechanical benifet of being able to run away from any encounter.
Your Signature Attack is done incorrectly. Standard starting sig attacks are 70 damage with a two turn cooldown. "Hour's" don't matter, and the Darkchip part is completely rejected.
Darkchips/Darkloids are not currently in this RP. Please remove all references to these two things.
Please make all of these changes, then try again.
You need to have descriptions for both your Navi and Op's Personality.
Your PET mod is rejected. It give you a mechanical benifet of being able to run away from any encounter.
Your Signature Attack is done incorrectly. Standard starting sig attacks are 70 damage with a two turn cooldown. "Hour's" don't matter, and the Darkchip part is completely rejected.
Darkchips/Darkloids are not currently in this RP. Please remove all references to these two things.
Please make all of these changes, then try again.
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Name: Jeffrey star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has red hair,A brown vest and two bags of food in them Personality: He is Bold in battle and nice to most people. Make him mad and regret it,When he gets mad he beats people up,Really short temper.
PET Modifications: He has wheels on his pet.
Bio After the death of his parents he took their Programs and combined them forming Hawkman.exe
Name Hawkman.exe (Hawkman)
Put the name of your navi. This can be almost anything, end should end with .EXE. DO NOT use names of navis from the MMBN series, nor any other megaman series, or any game series for that matter. Please try to be original. This includes PARTS of names, such as Mega, Rock, Zero, Proto, etc. "man", is allowed, however. It would also be useful to post the shortened name of your navi in parentheses, remember that shortened names are 8 letters or less.
Picture
He wears a gladiator's helmet and green clothes,with bronze armor over that and 2 sheaths on his back. HE also has two holsters. He is as tall as Protoman. He also has Some gauntlets on. He has boots on as well. The gauntlets and boots are SIlver.
Starting HP
This can be no more than 300, and usually isn't any less. Having less is either a show of skill, or the choice of a fool. 300
Element Blade
Ability DBl soul (Normally he uses Protosoul)
Buster 1
Max damage for normal buster attacks is 1. Not much else to say about this as it's pretty self explanitory.
Charge Attack Once his buster is charged he goes twice as fast as protoman and slices the navi opponet.
Custom Attack(s) FlyingSaber Slash
Energy Slash
Energy Bullets
Light sword
Navi Personality In Battle his navi is calm and cool but when he loses down to 1hp he gets hotheaded and sliced wildly. He then cools off and calms down. His rage is a symbol of what happened. His personality is the opposite of his netop's.
Signature Attack: Millenium Slash 59 damage and 2 turn cool down.
I am adding one more thing
Bio Hawkman.exe was created to defend the Silversword program by his Op's dad.
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: He has red hair,A brown vest and two bags of food in them Personality: He is Bold in battle and nice to most people. Make him mad and regret it,When he gets mad he beats people up,Really short temper.
PET Modifications: He has wheels on his pet.
Bio After the death of his parents he took their Programs and combined them forming Hawkman.exe
Name Hawkman.exe (Hawkman)
Put the name of your navi. This can be almost anything, end should end with .EXE. DO NOT use names of navis from the MMBN series, nor any other megaman series, or any game series for that matter. Please try to be original. This includes PARTS of names, such as Mega, Rock, Zero, Proto, etc. "man", is allowed, however. It would also be useful to post the shortened name of your navi in parentheses, remember that shortened names are 8 letters or less.
Picture
He wears a gladiator's helmet and green clothes,with bronze armor over that and 2 sheaths on his back. HE also has two holsters. He is as tall as Protoman. He also has Some gauntlets on. He has boots on as well. The gauntlets and boots are SIlver.
Starting HP
This can be no more than 300, and usually isn't any less. Having less is either a show of skill, or the choice of a fool. 300
Element Blade
Ability DBl soul (Normally he uses Protosoul)
Buster 1
Max damage for normal buster attacks is 1. Not much else to say about this as it's pretty self explanitory.
Charge Attack Once his buster is charged he goes twice as fast as protoman and slices the navi opponet.
Custom Attack(s) FlyingSaber Slash
Energy Slash
Energy Bullets
Light sword
Navi Personality In Battle his navi is calm and cool but when he loses down to 1hp he gets hotheaded and sliced wildly. He then cools off and calms down. His rage is a symbol of what happened. His personality is the opposite of his netop's.
Signature Attack: Millenium Slash 59 damage and 2 turn cool down.
I am adding one more thing
Bio Hawkman.exe was created to defend the Silversword program by his Op's dad.
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What the hell? This is even worse!
Drop the Starting HP stuff, Soul stuff, Buster Stuff, and Custom attack stuff. None of that is in this RP. HP and Busters are determined by stats, not you.
You still need more descriptions. As an example, Your netop wears a vest and has red hair. Where are his pants? Where are his shoes? Is is face an endless void?
And what on earth is the stuff about Sliversword? It doesn't make sense.
Oh, and I noticed that you dropped off the parts about element and subtype. Please put them back, you need those.
AND DON'T PM ME ONCE YOU FINISH CHANGING. I'LL GET TO IT WHEN I'M GOOD AND READY.
Drop the Starting HP stuff, Soul stuff, Buster Stuff, and Custom attack stuff. None of that is in this RP. HP and Busters are determined by stats, not you.
You still need more descriptions. As an example, Your netop wears a vest and has red hair. Where are his pants? Where are his shoes? Is is face an endless void?
And what on earth is the stuff about Sliversword? It doesn't make sense.
Oh, and I noticed that you dropped off the parts about element and subtype. Please put them back, you need those.
AND DON'T PM ME ONCE YOU FINISH CHANGING. I'LL GET TO IT WHEN I'M GOOD AND READY.
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Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.
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the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
And what's the logo? If you're going to mention the logo, then at least tell us what it looks like.
Very iffy on both wheels and a scope on the PET. You may have to drop one.
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His face is that of his op's father
You didn't even describe this father in question. We need to know WHAT his face looks like, not that it looks like that of a man who's never been described to us.
Signature Attack is fine now.
BUT YOU STILL HAVEN'T LISTED PERSONALITIES. DO SO. AND MAKE SURE THEY'RE AT LEAST HALF-DECENT.
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Quote (Hawkman.exe)
Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.
*Looms over the thread* This is good... I was getting tired of the well-read and smart people, anyway. I've needed a good nuke for a while now.
Things in BOLD are things that need to be removed or fixed. Specific changes will be listed below.
REGISTRATION NAZI TIME!
Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.
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1: THERE IS A SPACE BETWEEN COMMAS AND WORDS. REMEMBER IT, OR THE OWL WILL EAT YOU. ALSO, CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL.
2: You're supposed to remove the crap in the parenthesis from the basic registration form before you post it, ye idgit. Do so.
3: *Smacks SMS and EN for not letting him have fun with this one*
4: Add more description to your everything.
Now, fix this stuff, and then we'll see about getting you approved. Maybe.
-Twi
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Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that he is poor/
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scpe.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He is kind but hates Nebula,and any one his netop despises he deletes.
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Cosmic Slash of Destiny He jumps into the air and if any elemental panels are in play they turn back to normal panels,Swords appear in the back 3 panels dealing 20 then 20 then 30 damage.
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that he is poor/
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scpe.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He is kind but hates Nebula,and any one his netop despises he deletes.
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Cosmic Slash of Destiny He jumps into the air and if any elemental panels are in play they turn back to normal panels,Swords appear in the back 3 panels dealing 20 then 20 then 30 damage.
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Oh look. All the spelling and grammar mistakes are STILL THERE. It's called spellcheck. Use it.
I don't know what a "scpe" is.
Why would having one's Navi emblem on their shirt signify their personal wealth?!
Nebula hasn't been introduced into the RP, and chances are good that it won't in the future.
The default field description is still in your Custom Weapon slot.
Elemental panels are not yet in play in this RP, and panels simply do not exist. You also left the cooldown off your Signature Attack. Please put the cooldown back in.
I don't know what a "scpe" is.
Why would having one's Navi emblem on their shirt signify their personal wealth?!
Nebula hasn't been introduced into the RP, and chances are good that it won't in the future.
The default field description is still in your Custom Weapon slot.
Elemental panels are not yet in play in this RP, and panels simply do not exist. You also left the cooldown off your Signature Attack. Please put the cooldown back in.
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Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that his dad helped him grow in skill and that he and his navi are 2 of the best battlers.
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scope.
Bio He deleted many navis his father assigned him until Hawkman.exe was created by His father for him so that he would have a really good and tough navi.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He has a really short temper and Is calm usually.
Custom Weapon: Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Saber Rain Swords rain down from the stars impaling enemies and repelling them from striking it does 70 damage and takes a 2 turn cool down in which he can't attack.
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that his dad helped him grow in skill and that he and his navi are 2 of the best battlers.
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scope.
Bio He deleted many navis his father assigned him until Hawkman.exe was created by His father for him so that he would have a really good and tough navi.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He has a really short temper and Is calm usually.
Custom Weapon: Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Saber Rain Swords rain down from the stars impaling enemies and repelling them from striking it does 70 damage and takes a 2 turn cool down in which he can't attack.
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Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that his dad helped him grow in skill and that he and his navi are 2 of the best battlers.
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scope.
Bio He deleted many navis his father assigned him until Hawkman.exe was created by His father for him so that he would have a really good and tough navi.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He has a really short temper and Is calm usually.
Custom Weapon: Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Saber Rain Swords rain down from the stars impaling enemies and repelling them from striking it does 70 damage and takes a 2 turn cool down in which he can't attack.
This is my cc topic not your spam topic so LEAVE.
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that his dad helped him grow in skill and that he and his navi are 2 of the best battlers.
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scope.
Bio He deleted many navis his father assigned him until Hawkman.exe was created by His father for him so that he would have a really good and tough navi.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He has a really short temper and Is calm usually.
Custom Weapon: Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Saber Rain Swords rain down from the stars impaling enemies and repelling them from striking it does 70 damage and takes a 2 turn cool down in which he can't attack.
This is my cc topic not your spam topic so LEAVE.