I recently re-read Veda's description and wasn't particularly happy with some stuff of her design. So I'd like to change her slightly. Edits are in italics.
BEFORE
Appearance: Veda is a short, thin, flat and lightly tanned girl. Her black hair is styled in a neat topknot which is held there with a white strap. Attached on the front of the topknot is a large round pin with her emblem on it. An opened hand with 108 small beads around the edge. She has sharp looking green eyes and a small mouth on her youthful face with somewhat bigger ears on the sides.
Hanging from the back of her topknot is a long chain of silver beads reaching to her back with a paintbrush hanging vertically from it. The brush has a silver handle and can produce any color from its bristles.
Veda wears a black skinsuit over her body, from the top of her neck all the way to her toes. She wears a pair of wide pants made of blue cloth held up by a big light blue sash. She wears a pair of short silver gloves with banded cuffs and has a necklace of 108 silver beads entwined around her right arm, with the 108th bead in the palm of her right hand. Veda also wears silver boots, but have the shape of her feet.
Attached to Veda's body and outfit are 8 hands, nicknamed the Matrika Hands, which are all entirely silver with a rounded wrist at the end. She's got a hand on the back of each shoulder, the fingers on top of them except the thumb. Another pair of hands covering her breasts, positioned inward from the sides. The next pair is positioned downwards on her hips, with the wrists below the sash of her pants. The final pair of hands is on her behind, positioned downards, with the wrists behind her pants' sash as well.
AFTER
Appearance: Veda is a short, thin, flat and lightly tanned girl. Her black hair is styled in a neat topknot which is held there with a white strap. Attached on the front of the topknot is a large round pin with her emblem on it: an opened book on the background and a brush with black ink at its tip on the foreground. She has sharp looking green eyes and a small mouth on her youthful face with somewhat bigger ears on the sides.
Hanging from the back of her topknot is a chain of 108 silver beads that is three times Veda's height in length. She can control this chain of beads as if it's a fifth limb. The 108th and final bead is larger than the other 107 and has a painter's brush attached to it, which can produce any color from its bristles.
Veda wears a black skinsuit over her body, from the top of her neck all the way to her toes. She wears a pair of wide pants made of blue cloth held up by a big light blue sash. She wears a pair of short silver gloves with banded cuffs. The tops of her fingers can be removed to reveal small paintbrushes under them. Veda also wears silver boots, but have the shape of her feet.
Attached to Veda's body and outfit are 8 feminine hands, nicknamed the Matrika Hands, which are all entirely silver with a rounded wrist at the end. These hands appear more mature and larger than Veda's own hands. She's got a hand on the back of each shoulder, the fingers on top of them except the thumb. Another pair of hands covering her breasts, positioned inward from the sides. The next pair is positioned downwards on her hips, with the wrists below the sash of her pants. The final pair of hands is on her behind, positioned downards, with the wrists behind her pants' sash as well.
