VenusMan Design Edits

Long story short, I want to edit VenusMan so the aspects I find cumbersome to write for of his latest design can be removed. I bolded the changes just for convenience's sake. Also the old version with changes striked through in a spoiler tag.
His new design:


NetNavi
Name: VenusMan.EXE
Gender: Male
Type: Wood/Team
Appearance: VenusMan is a tall (6 feet; 1.82 meter) and slim Navi with a light green skin color. While not particularly muscular, he is defined enough to look fit. He has dark green hair that’s styled and slicked to the back, leaving nothing over the forehead. Covering his eyes, which are entirely black without pupil or iris, are goggles with red round glasses and black rims. VenusMan also has a fairly wide mouth, filled with sharp, fang-like teeth. Covering his ears are circular audio receivers with his emblem on it. VenusMan’s emblem is a red heart on a dark green background with a single eye in the center, this eye having black sclera and a red pupil.
Covering his body, from top to bottom, is a black bodysuit. He wears a piece of armor over his chest which is dark green in color. The bottom side of the armor resembles an upside-down V and goes from the center of his chest to just above his sides. This bottom edge is jagged, as if they’re big sharp teeth. This armor also covers up left arm up to his wrist, but not his right side. Right below the jagged edge, on his bodysuit, is a red line that follows the same pattern. A red broad line goes across the sides of his bodysuit.
VenusMan’s glove on his left side is dark green and has claws at the end. Visibly entwined around his wrist are light green vines that disappear into the sleeve of his armor.
Attached to VenusMan’s left hip is a dark green disc with a red circle on it. On his bodysuit is a red line around the disc. This disc is a magnetized holster for VenusMan’s pistol, which is dark green with a black top and has a blocky and futuristic design to them.
Curled around VenusMan’s neck is a light green thick and large scarf that is textured like a plant. It is so big that VenusMan could easily hide the lower half of his face by tucking in his head. Coming from this scarf is a huge plant-like growth, mostly leaves and vines, that covers VenusMan’s entire right arm, giving it an enlarged and mutated look. As a result his right shoulder and arm look a lot more beefy than his left. Embedded between the leaves and vines on the side of his right shoulder is a circular plate with his emblem on it. Hanging from the left side of this scarf is the other end, falling over the back of VenusMan's left shoulder.
This arm is also the ‘home’ of Carnivore, a virus that has embedded itself in VenusMan’s programming. Carnivore has the shape of a plant-like light green orb that has a large mouth with razor-sharp teeth and a large eye, black sclera and red pupil, inside of the mouth. VenusMan can summon Carnivore from his right hand, usually launched with a vine linking them. When not in use, Carnivore’s eye is visible from VenusMan’s right shoulder.
VenusMan’s boots are mostly dark green, with the soles and a small part connected to the soles at the front being black. The top side of the boots at the front are angled in an upside-down V shape, jagged like teeth as his body armor. A red line on the bodysuit follows this pattern along the way. The bottom of his boots appear blocky in design. VenusMan’s boots are integrated into his bodysuit and look as if they’re part of his bodysuit.
Personality: Easily infatuated. Acts cool & cold because he thinks the women like that. Actually doesn’t know what to do if he were to succeed in wooing a woman. Normally very laid back and dismissive. Generally a fine guy to hang out with. Dislikes creepy things and will actively try to get out of its way. Does not dislike or get scared of Carnivore though. Smokes.
Custom Weapons:
- Pistol, VenusMan’s Buster weapon, which can adjust its form and size based on the BattleChip transmitted.
- Carnivore, a virus that was made by Maru Lulu that attaches to NetNavis and grow stronger by feasting on others of its kind. Lives in VenusMan’s right arm. Just like VenusMan’s pistol, Carnivore can also make changes to VenusMan’s right arm to incorporate BattleChips.
- Alraune, VenusMan’s link to Carnivore allows him to create floral monsters, similar to viruses, that obey his commands but will usually end up doing their own thing as per their programming. Their intelligence and behavior is similar to zombies. Each Alraune looks a bit different, but they all share the following things: female, light green skin, sharp fangs, clawed hands, completely black eyes.


Old design for reference, removals and edits striked through
NetNavi
Name: VenusMan.EXE
Gender: Male
Type: Wood/Team
Appearance: VenusMan is a tall (6 feet; 1.82 meter) and slim Navi with a light green skin color. While not particularly muscular, he is defined enough to look fit. He has dark green hair that’s styled and slicked to the back, leaving nothing over the forehead. Covering his eyes, which are entirely black without pupil or iris, are goggles with red round glasses and black rims. VenusMan also has a fairly wide mouth, filled with sharp, fang-like teeth. Covering his ears are circular audio receivers with his emblem on it, his emblem being a red heart with dark green fang-like spikes coming from it on a light green background.
Covering his body, from top to bottom, is a black bodysuit. He wears a piece of armor over his chest which is dark green in color. The bottom side of the armor resembles an upside-down V and goes from the center of his chest to just above his sides. This bottom edge is jagged, as if they’re big sharp teeth. This armor also covers up his arms up to his wrists. Right below the jagged edge, on his bodysuit, is a red line that follows the same pattern. A red broad line goes across the sides of his bodysuit.
He’s got an octagonal dark green backpack, with the sides being longer than the edges. The bottom side, however, ends up in a V shape instead of a straight line and connects to the bottom side of the chest armor, without it being jagged. The red line of his bodysuit also goes along the bottom side of the backpack. The backpack juts out a bit with the grooves of the octagonal shape. Sticking out of the backpack are 4 flower pods, 2 on each side. These have large red leaf-shaped petals, about the size of VenusMan’s lower arm. These are positioned near the bottom of the backpack with their connectors positioned like a crescent across the bottom. Each flower pod is angled outwards. At the top of the backpack, centered, is a circular piece with VenusMan’s emblem on it.
VenusMan’s gloves are dark green and have claws at the end. In actuality, VenusMan’s hands are a set of flower pods as those on his backpack. Except these have their petals curled backwards across VenusMan’s arm.
Attached to each of VenusMan’s hips is a dark green disc dark green with a red circle on it. On his bodysuit is a red line around the discs. These discs are magnetized holsters for VenusMan’s pistols, which are dark green with a black top and have a blocky and futuristic design to them.
VenusMan’s boots are mostly dark green, with the soles and a small part connected to the soles at the front being black. The top side of the boots at the front are angles in an upside-down V shape, jagged like teeth as his body armor. A red line on the bodysuit follows this pattern along the way. The bottom of his boots appear blocky in design. VenusMan’s boots are integrated into his bodysuit and look as if they’re part of his bodysuit.
Curled around VenusMan’s neck is a dark green thick and large scarf that has a texture like a plant. It is so big that VenusMan could easily hide the lower half of his face by tucking in his head. Neither side of the scarf is anywhere to be seen. The scarf can grow dark green leaves from the inside, which are capable of enveloping VenusMan’s entire head.
Once his head is enveloped by these leaves, it transforms into Carnivore. Carnivore looks like a massive ball with a dark green leaf-like exterior, a giant mouth filled with razor-sharp teeth and 2 bright shining red eyes that are inside of the mouth. Carnivore can launch itself from VenusMan’s neck, keeping the connection between body and itself through a vine with an indefinite length. Once launched, Carnivore can easily grow up to 10 times its normal size. VenusMan’s head can't go back to normal until Carnivore returns. VenusMan, however, still maintains control over his body and his voice still comes from his body, although he essentially becomes blind when this happens.

Personality: Easily infatuated. Acts cool & cold because he thinks the women like that. Actually doesn’t know what to do if he were to succeed at wooing a woman. Normally very laidback and dismissive. Generally a fine guy to hang out with. Dislikes creepy things and will actively try to get out of its way. Does not dislike or get scared of Carnivore though. Smokes.
Custom Weapon: ORCHID; Offensive Remote Control Hardware Interchangeable Drone. This is the designation of VenusMan’s flower pods. These flower pods can disengage from VenusMan’s body and float on their own, giving VenusMan full control over them as if they’re a set of additional limbs for him. They can create whatever weapon they want within them. Or another set of hands, as VenusMan’s own hands are a set of ORCHIDs already. He also has Carnivore to use for weaponry, but that’s only for more special occasions.
Approved, welcome to the predatory Navis club.