Kiyo and Sozo.exe

13 years ago
We welcome new members with open arms. I can't even approve or disapprove you anyway, just giving out a few pointers to help a new guy out. ^^

Oh, if you want to try getting into the chat, try updating Java or using different browsers. It's a tiny bit finicky to get working. Kind of tsundere.
13 years ago
^^
13 years ago
Now What?
13 years ago
- Still missing your signature attack's description, damage, etc.
- You have your Navi/NetOp's height/weight in their personality
- Your descriptions are still lacking, please heed Fera's advice, and read through his suggestions.
13 years ago
(Ok,I made some Changes)
13 years ago
Still looks like you didn't fully read Fera's guidance...

Kiyo's Description:
- Japan and the Philippines don't exist in the Rockman EXE universe. The "equivalents" for those countries would be Electopia and Yumland

Signature Attack:
- Battling here is more like the Rockman EXE anime than the games, you don't fight on a 6x3 grid.
- READ THE SIG ATTACK RULES
-- try something like this: Bloody Cross: Sozo dashes in and slashes an enemy, dealing damage and causing his target to "bleed" for several turns afterwards
(20dmg Slashing + 20dmg for next 2 turns + 2 Turn Cool Down) (60pts)
[^initial attack]---[^"bleeding" for 2 turns]---[^cooldown]-------[^total point cost]
13 years ago
Ok I Failed...Again ._.
13 years ago
Now I have to wait .w.
13 years ago
The grammar is quite a bit off, and the descriptions are pretty light, but you should be able to improve later on.

APPROVED


GET CHIPS: Cannon x1, Shotgun x1, RageClaw1 x1
GET SUBCHIPS: MiniEnergy x2
GET NCP: Undershirt, Shield

Please post your NetOp and your Navi in the appropriate databases, then create your forum signature. Once you're done with that, feel free to start RPing.
13 years ago
Thanks and Dont worry,I will ^^ (Im 15 Anyways ._.)