Rayman

You still need to do more work on your Navi. You have not used proper punctuation, grammar, or capitalization. You have lots of run-on sentences in your description, with one section being just one huge run-on....

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Stats: speed+2 attack+3 charge+2 rapid+2 level 4

No. Remove that. (I'm telling you the same thing you're about to be told by Mods, Officials, and Admin.)


Rayman, let me level with you... In this RP, there is one golden rule, you will be rewarded based on the ammount of effort you put into it. If you do not put much effort into your Navi and Role Play, do not expect much in return.

If you want help, then ask us for help, and we will help you.

So... yeah... it's like that.

Ill get right on it

Ok ive added more info and ive made it in complete sentences what else do i have to do in order to get my navi made please

I suppose this is good, but I'll wait on the others to give opinions.

Mods, that means you too.

Well, aside from me losing my monopoly on Wood type, I see nothing wrong. It's better than darkstar's, anyway.

I say okay.

Ooh. Rass loses his monopoly on Recov, too.



GET:
NaviCustomizer (max points: 40)
NaviCust Newbie Pack: ATK+1 (10), RAP+1 (5), CHG+1 (5), Undershirt (10)
BattleChip Newbie Pack: Cannon [40], Shotgun [50], RageClaw [40]

Rass already lost it. AdrianX is Recov subtype, as well.