The unofficial subtitle is "Sal jumps off things with lots of words in between," and that's pretty much what it is. It's the story of a brain-damaged thrill-seeker and her stalker, a supernatural being with control over luck.
The story's still in its first-draft phase. The only editing it's been subjected to are basic spelling and grammar fixes that I've done as I typed it up. This means that it's pretty crappy. There are vast tracts of dialogue, narration, and entire scenes that I'm going to drastically change as I start editing it for real. At this point, all I'm looking for are people to read it and give me some initial reaction to the story.
As of the current upload, I've typed up all 22 chapters (about 23,000 words, or 54 pages).
Post your thoughts, comments, feedback, and questions in this thread. Some basic guidelines:
- read any further through this topic if you don't want to have the story ruined before hand. I hereby give my permission people to make this topic spoilerville.
[li]point out spelling mistakes. I'll pick them up when I put the story through the first real editing phase.
[li]give me a hard time because a few of the characters can be classified as furries if you really squint.
shower me with praisetear this apart.
[li]ask me about a passage that you're not too clear on, or events that you can't decipher.
[li]make suggestions as to how to make scenes or stuff better than they are now.
(If for some reason you can't read a PDF, let me know and I'll send you the original Word document.)
Thanks for reading.