Operator Name: Jack Kingston
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Appearance: Jack is a semi-tall teenager with spiked black hair hanging down to the middle of his back. He is tan with blue eyes. His clothing style is clothes with red lightning bolt designs on them.
Personality:Jack is a bit of a spaz, and is also reckless. However, this is what defines his ability to bounce back, even after the severe trauma that he is often subject to. His recklessness also allows him to be a risk taker. He is kind and has a good heart, and his parents and friends are proud of him.
PET mods: all red PET with gold stripe going down center(vertically) NetNavi
Name: ExploderMan.EXE
Element: Null
Subtype: Break
Appearance: ExploderMan is a semi-tall red navi with a gold stripe going from the front of his helmet to the bottom of his back. His entire body(excluding his face) is covered in armor. He has red eyes and dark brown hair descending from the bottom of the back of his helmet to his lower back. He has a natural cannon on his left arm in the shape of a small bazooka, for the use of his signature move, Astrapi. His navi symbol is a seven pointed red star, on his chest, which represents an explosion.
Personality: ExploderMan's most defining character trait is that he is completely loyal to his NetOp, Jack, and will follow any order given to him. He is also willing to sacrifice himself for Jack. The two work together very well since they practice so many hours a day. ExploderMan was Jack's best friend as a child when he recieved him as a gift. ExploderMan is also serious and doesn't talk much, but not to the point of being antisocial.
Custom Weapon: ExplodeGun- gun on ExploderMan's left arm that shoots lasers.
Signature Move: Astrapi: Shoots lightning bolt at opponent causing small explosion. (60dmg + 2TCD) (60pts)
NaviCust: HP+50
Jack and ExploderMan
last edited by
Please read the rules for new character registration. Here are a few of the many things you'll need to correct:
- Your NetOp has no description, personality, nor PET modifications (if any)
- Your Navi description and personality are very vague and need to be more descriptive
- You did not describe your Navi's custom weapon
- Your Navi "attacks" apparently follow some other system we don't use. We have Signature Attacks, and you need to read the rules for them here. The different signature attack effects and point costs are found here.
If you have any questions, or would like assistance in creating your character, please feel free to ask any of us, or come over to the chat to meet the other members directly.
- Your NetOp has no description, personality, nor PET modifications (if any)
- Your Navi description and personality are very vague and need to be more descriptive
- You did not describe your Navi's custom weapon
- Your Navi "attacks" apparently follow some other system we don't use. We have Signature Attacks, and you need to read the rules for them here. The different signature attack effects and point costs are found here.
If you have any questions, or would like assistance in creating your character, please feel free to ask any of us, or come over to the chat to meet the other members directly.
last edited by
- Looks better, but you still need more for your Navi Description. Does he have eyes? Hands? Feet? What does the cannon look like? Can you see his Navi symbol? If so, where is it and what does it look like? etc.
- As for your sig attack, every 40 points equates to 1 turn cool down. So, 60 points = 2 TCD (Turn Cool Down).
- You can choose 1 of the following NaviCust Programs (you also get UnderShirt): HP+50, Shield, Set Sand, Set Lava, Set Ice, Set Sea, Set Grass, Set Solar, Set Glass, or ResetStage.
Finally, please throw some spaces in there between sections so it's not one blob of text.
- As for your sig attack, every 40 points equates to 1 turn cool down. So, 60 points = 2 TCD (Turn Cool Down).
- You can choose 1 of the following NaviCust Programs (you also get UnderShirt): HP+50, Shield, Set Sand, Set Lava, Set Ice, Set Sea, Set Grass, Set Solar, Set Glass, or ResetStage.
Finally, please throw some spaces in there between sections so it's not one blob of text.
last edited by
Quote (Lt._Grim_Reaper)
- Looks better, but you still need more for your Navi Description. Does he have eyes? Hands? Feet? What does the cannon look like? Can you see his Navi symbol? If so, where is it and what does it look like? etc.
- As for your sig attack, every 40 points equates to 1 turn cool down. So, 60 points = 2 TCD (Turn Cool Down).
- You can choose 1 of the following NaviCust Programs (you also get UnderShirt): HP+50, Shield, Set Sand, Set Lava, Set Ice, Set Sea, Set Grass, Set Solar, Set Glass, or ResetStage.
Finally, please throw some spaces in there between sections so it's not one blob of text.
now im finished and please need approval
last edited by
Quote (Virusman)
Signature Move: Astrapi/70-CoolDown2
This signature attack is worth 70 sig points. (70dmg = 70 sig points). You only get 60 sig points to start out with.
You also need to describe the attack itself. Is it a laser beam or something? A melee attack? A low orbit ion cannon?
last edited by
GET CHIP: Cannon x1, Shotgun x1, RageClaw1 x1
GET SUBCHIP: MiniEnergy x2
GET NCP: Undershirt, HP +50
Post your Navi's profile and NetOp's profile in the appropriate database threads, then create your forum signature. Once you have both of those complete, please make sure you read up on the posting/roleplaying/battling rules before you start RPing.
P.S. Don't email me, use PMs please.
There are a few things I noticed in your registration that need changing.
Quote ()
in the anime, it is shown that ExploderMan was Jack's best friend as a child when he recieved him as a gift.
- All references to anime, comics, and videogame characters are forbidden. Remove them.
Quote ()
and his protagonism allows his constant divine favors (i.e. Leaping out of a 2-story window into the ocean and surviving)
- Remove this.