ExploderMan walks cautiously around ACDC Net in search of viruses, hoping to find weaker ones for his first virus busting.

ExploderMan attacks with Cannon before dodging an attack. Then he quickly uses Shotgun and then Rage Claw.

NetNavi Name: ExploderMan.EXE

Element: Null

Subtype: Break

Appearance: ExploderMan is a semi-tall red navi with a gold stripe going from the front of his helmet to the bottom of his back. His entire body(excluding his face) is covered in armor. He has red eyes and dark brown hair descending from the bottom of the back of his helmet to his lower back. He has a natural cannon on his left arm in the shape of a small bazooka, for the use of his signature move, Astrapi. His navi symbol is a seven pointed red star, on his chest, which represents an explosion.

Personality: ExploderMan's most defining character trait is that he is completely loyal to his NetOp, Jack, and will follow any order given to him. He is also willing to sacrifice himself for Jack. The two work together very well since they practice so many hours a day. In the anime, it is shown that ExploderMan was Jack's best friend as a child when he recieved him as a gift. ExploderMan is also serious and doesn't talk much, but not to the point of being antisocial.

Custom Weapon: ExplodeGun- gun on ExploderMan's left arm that shoots lasers.

Signature Move: Astrapi: Shoots lightning bolt at opponent causing small explosion. (60dmg + 2TCD) (60pts)

NaviCust: HP+50

BattleChips: Cannon, Shotgun, Rage Claw

SubChips: MiniEnergy x2

100HP

Operator Name: Jack Kingston

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Appearance: Jack is a semi-tall teenager with spiked black hair hanging down to the middle of his back. He is tan with blue eyes. His clothing style is clothes with red lightning bolt designs on them.

Personality:Jack is a bit of a spaz, and is also reckless. However, this is what defines his ability to bounce back, even after the severe trauma that he is often subject to. His recklessness also allows him to be a risk taker, and his protagonism allows his constant divine favors (i.e. Leaping out of a 2-story window into the ocean and surviving). He is kind and has a good heart, and his parents and friends are proud of him.

PET mods: all red PET with gold stripe going down center(vertically)

A gold light appears and shapes into the form of ExploderMan. He looks around anxiously for viruses so he can bust his first ones(he walks around cautiously,HP100[max]).

alright thats fixed whats next

Quote (Lt._Grim_Reaper)

- Looks better, but you still need more for your Navi Description. Does he have eyes? Hands? Feet? What does the cannon look like? Can you see his Navi symbol? If so, where is it and what does it look like? etc.

- As for your sig attack, every 40 points equates to 1 turn cool down. So, 60 points = 2 TCD (Turn Cool Down).

- You can choose 1 of the following NaviCust Programs (you also get UnderShirt): HP+50, Shield, Set Sand, Set Lava, Set Ice, Set Sea, Set Grass, Set Solar, Set Glass, or ResetStage.


Finally, please throw some spaces in there between sections so it's not one blob of text.

now im finished and please need approval

Operator Name: Jack Kingston

Age: 14

Gender: Male

Appearance: Jack is a semi-tall teenager with spiked black hair hanging down to the middle of his back. He is tan with blue eyes. His clothing style is clothes with red lightning bolt designs on them.

Personality:Jack is a bit of a spaz, and is also reckless. However, this is what defines his ability to bounce back, even after the severe trauma that he is often subject to. His recklessness also allows him to be a risk taker. He is kind and has a good heart, and his parents and friends are proud of him.

PET mods: all red PET with gold stripe going down center(vertically) NetNavi

Name: ExploderMan.EXE

Element: Null

Subtype: Break

Appearance: ExploderMan is a semi-tall red navi with a gold stripe going from the front of his helmet to the bottom of his back. His entire body(excluding his face) is covered in armor. He has red eyes and dark brown hair descending from the bottom of the back of his helmet to his lower back. He has a natural cannon on his left arm in the shape of a small bazooka, for the use of his signature move, Astrapi. His navi symbol is a seven pointed red star, on his chest, which represents an explosion.

Personality: ExploderMan's most defining character trait is that he is completely loyal to his NetOp, Jack, and will follow any order given to him. He is also willing to sacrifice himself for Jack. The two work together very well since they practice so many hours a day. ExploderMan was Jack's best friend as a child when he recieved him as a gift. ExploderMan is also serious and doesn't talk much, but not to the point of being antisocial.

Custom Weapon: ExplodeGun- gun on ExploderMan's left arm that shoots lasers.

Signature Move: Astrapi: Shoots lightning bolt at opponent causing small explosion. (60dmg + 2TCD) (60pts)

NaviCust: HP+50