Twins!

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Awww, there goes my CelesteCross.

Looks alright. Grab someone else to look at this.

I don't see anything glaringly wrong, although, if I'm reading this right, you two plan on making a separate joint subplot in the future? Or is it a second half to this plot?

Second part to this, most likely. We haven't really talked too much about it, but it'll probably be some sort of revenge mission, coupled with a spiffy flashback if we can plan it all out.

Changes! Due to time constraints, we're switching this to a battle 5 fight. Due to the fact that with a weakness to Wood, I alone can rip through this boss easily and we don't want sis to be a pushover, she's getting bumped to 800 HP. Now then, I ask Admins for approval and I ask some mod to volunteer to mod the boss fight. Any takers?

I am Stephen Colbert, and I approve these changes.

Wait, I'm Leon. Crap, I knew something was odd today.

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Approved, blah. Go find volunteers, etc.

Thanks to everyone involved in making our subplot seem awesome.

Also, closing this since is hasn't been yet ^^;