Operator
Name: Violet
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Tall blonde girl with purple eyes. She wears a dark purple shirt with a Rhinestone skull, black jeans, a spiked wristband, a wolf pendant, and long, black gloves with hot pink trim.
Personality: Most of the time she stays quiet and secluded, but when in a good mood she can be very outgoing.
PET Modifications: black with hot pink trim
NetNavi
Name: Terra
Gender: Female
Element: Wood
Type: Sword
Appearance: A cute, fluffy lioness cub that wears a hot pink T-shirt and black shorts. She also has a black rose barrette on her left ear and a silver necklace.
Personality: Acts very kind and sweet...just don't get her angry.
Custom Weapon: VineSword; A giant sword with vines and cracks all over. The handle is made out of gold with two green gems on either side or a big, blue diamond in the middle.
Signature Attack: Terra Ensis; Turns into a very big, four armed, human like lioness with four red eyes, Long silver claws, black ram-like horns, and vines growing out of her back. She leaps into the air and whips the enemy 7 times with the vines coming out of her back. She then lands and slashes the enemy with her VineSword, finishing her attack. (35 damage wood, 35 damage sword) Cooldown: 2
Violet & Terra
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We have no 'Sword' damage, so you can change it to wood as well or normal.
Aboout the appearance.. Is it humanoid or really just a lion cub? If so, how would it carry around a sword?
Aboout the appearance.. Is it humanoid or really just a lion cub? If so, how would it carry around a sword?
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Ok hows this?^_^
Name: Violet
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Tall blonde girl with purple eyes. She wears a dark purple shirt with a Rhinestone skull, black jeans, a spiked wristband, a wolf pendant, and long, black gloves with hot pink trim.
Personality: Most of the time she stays quiet and secluded, but when in a good mood she can be very outgoing.
PET Modifications: black with hot pink trim
NetNavi
Name: Terra
Gender: Female
Element: Wood
Type: Sword
Appearance: A cute, fluffy human-like lioness cub that wears a hot pink T-shirt and black shorts. She also has a black rose barrette on her left ear and a silver necklace.
Personality: Acts very kind and sweet...just don't get her angry.
Custom Weapon: VineSword; A giant sword with vines and cracks all over. The handle is made out of gold with two green gems on either side or a big, blue diamond in the middle.
Signature Attack: Terra Ensis; Turns into a very big, four armed, human like lioness with four red eyes, Long silver claws, black ram-like horns, and vines growing out of her back. She leaps into the air and whips the enemy 7 times with the vines coming out of her back. She then lands and slashes the enemy with her VineSword, finishing her attack. (35 damage wood, 35 damage Normal) Cooldown: 2
Name: Violet
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Appearance: Tall blonde girl with purple eyes. She wears a dark purple shirt with a Rhinestone skull, black jeans, a spiked wristband, a wolf pendant, and long, black gloves with hot pink trim.
Personality: Most of the time she stays quiet and secluded, but when in a good mood she can be very outgoing.
PET Modifications: black with hot pink trim
NetNavi
Name: Terra
Gender: Female
Element: Wood
Type: Sword
Appearance: A cute, fluffy human-like lioness cub that wears a hot pink T-shirt and black shorts. She also has a black rose barrette on her left ear and a silver necklace.
Personality: Acts very kind and sweet...just don't get her angry.
Custom Weapon: VineSword; A giant sword with vines and cracks all over. The handle is made out of gold with two green gems on either side or a big, blue diamond in the middle.
Signature Attack: Terra Ensis; Turns into a very big, four armed, human like lioness with four red eyes, Long silver claws, black ram-like horns, and vines growing out of her back. She leaps into the air and whips the enemy 7 times with the vines coming out of her back. She then lands and slashes the enemy with her VineSword, finishing her attack. (35 damage wood, 35 damage Normal) Cooldown: 2
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Better. While not the best, it looks workable. No offense.
Wait for a person with the user group OFFICIAL or ADMINISTRATOR (or Admin, dunno what they turned it into) to approve your character for the RP. I'll ask around for you to get them into business.
Wait for a person with the user group OFFICIAL or ADMINISTRATOR (or Admin, dunno what they turned it into) to approve your character for the RP. I'll ask around for you to get them into business.
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Well...looks OK.
Thing is, both Operator and Navi could use some more work on their personality. At the moment, both Violet and Terra have very clipped, short, personalities that probably don't describe them as well as they could. Try and lengthen out their personalities a little; give us a better idea of what Violet and Terra are like in different situations. What you've already got here is a good start, but it could stand to be built on a little more.
Add some personality to both characters and then we'll see where we stand then.
Thing is, both Operator and Navi could use some more work on their personality. At the moment, both Violet and Terra have very clipped, short, personalities that probably don't describe them as well as they could. Try and lengthen out their personalities a little; give us a better idea of what Violet and Terra are like in different situations. What you've already got here is a good start, but it could stand to be built on a little more.
Add some personality to both characters and then we'll see where we stand then.