My netop and navi

Quote (Hawkman.exe)

Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.

NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's.  His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.

*Looms over the thread* This is good... I was getting tired of the well-read and smart people, anyway. I've needed a good nuke for a while now.

Things in BOLD are things that need to be removed or fixed. Specific changes will be listed below.

REGISTRATION NAZI TIME!

Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.

NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.

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1: THERE IS A SPACE BETWEEN COMMAS AND WORDS. REMEMBER IT, OR THE OWL WILL EAT YOU. ALSO, CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL.

2: You're supposed to remove the crap in the parenthesis from the basic registration form before you post it, ye idgit. Do so.

3: *Smacks SMS and EN for not letting him have fun with this one*

4: Add more description to your everything.

Now, fix this stuff, and then we'll see about getting you approved. Maybe.

-Twi
Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that he is poor/
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scpe.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He is kind but hates Nebula,and any one his netop despises he deletes.
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Cosmic Slash of Destiny He jumps into the air and if any elemental panels are in play they turn back to normal panels,Swords appear in the back 3 panels dealing 20 then 20 then 30 damage.
Oh look. All the spelling and grammar mistakes are STILL THERE. It's called spellcheck. Use it.

I don't know what a "scpe" is.

Why would having one's Navi emblem on their shirt signify their personal wealth?!

Nebula hasn't been introduced into the RP, and chances are good that it won't in the future.

The default field description is still in your Custom Weapon slot.

Elemental panels are not yet in play in this RP, and panels simply do not exist. You also left the cooldown off your Signature Attack. Please put the cooldown back in.

Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that his dad helped him grow in skill and that he and his navi are 2 of the best battlers.
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scope.
Bio He deleted many navis his father assigned him until Hawkman.exe was created by His father for him so that he would have a really good and tough navi.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He has a really short temper and Is calm usually.
Custom Weapon: Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Saber Rain Swords rain down from the stars impaling enemies and repelling them from striking it does 70 damage and takes a 2 turn cool down in which he can't attack.
Anon says:

And you know what i say to that? Stop it.
Anon says: this is for you.

*removed*
How the fuck did Anonymous make it here?

Either way, I'm B&ing your ass.
Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people that his dad helped him grow in skill and that he and his navi are 2 of the best battlers.
Personality: He is a bold leader in times of distress and Is Wrathful in battle, Sometimes if you make him mad he will delete your navi.
PET Modifications: It has a scope.
Bio He deleted many navis his father assigned him until Hawkman.exe was created by His father for him so that he would have a really good and tough navi.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality: He has a really short temper and Is calm usually.
Custom Weapon: Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: Saber Rain Swords rain down from the stars impaling enemies and repelling them from striking it does 70 damage and takes a 2 turn cool down in which he can't attack.

This is my cc topic not your spam topic so LEAVE.
1: Your profile still sucks, but I'm going to approve it anyway.

2: Did you not notice that our 'dear friend' Anon over there is BANNED? Yeah. We took care of it.

Approved.

-Twi