Quote (Hawkman.exe)
Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.
*Looms over the thread* This is good... I was getting tired of the well-read and smart people, anyway. I've needed a good nuke for a while now.
Things in BOLD are things that need to be removed or fixed. Specific changes will be listed below.
REGISTRATION NAZI TIME!
Name: Jeffrey Star
Age:15
Gender: Male
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) His blue eyes,Brown hair,Black jeans and white shirt which has the logo of his navi on it remind people he is an expert.
Personality:
PET Modifications: (IE, wheels to let the Navi control where the PET goes or a scope to help pinpoint areas of interest. Most common modification is a simple color scheme, like black with silver trim. No PETs with completely different shapes, such as a watch, or weapon-shaped PETs allowed.) He has wheels on it as well as a scope and it is White and green.
NetNavi
Name: Hawkman.exe
Gender: Male
Element: (Fire, Aqua, Wood, Elec, or Normal) Normal
Type: (Break, Sword, Cursor, Wind, Recover, or Normal) Sword
Appearance: (Written description, pictures/sprites ARE allowed, but you must have a verbal description.) He wears gladiator like armor,His face is that of his op's father and his body build is muscular. He wears gladiator like armor and has a helm like a knight's. His eyes are Blue and his Armor and helm are white.
Personality:
Custom Weapon: (Your weapon replaces a NormalNavi's buster and does exactly the same damage as everyone else's.) Sword of Fate
Signature Attack: (See the Signature Attack Rules topic for specific details. KEEP IT SIMPLE. The most common layout for first-level Signature Attacks is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.) Destiny Slash He jumps into the air then spins slicing 70 damage to an enemy then he must cool down for 2 turns.
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1: THERE IS A SPACE BETWEEN COMMAS AND WORDS. REMEMBER IT, OR THE OWL WILL EAT YOU. ALSO, CAPS LOCK IS CRUISE CONTROL FOR COOL.
2: You're supposed to remove the crap in the parenthesis from the basic registration form before you post it, ye idgit. Do so.
3: *Smacks SMS and EN for not letting him have fun with this one*
4: Add more description to your everything.
Now, fix this stuff, and then we'll see about getting you approved. Maybe.
-Twi
