Operator
Name: Hyiru Hien
Age: 15
Gander:Male
Apperence:Tall liteskin, Wears blue headband on forehead that blows in the wind.Has long black hair.Wears long sleeve blue and white shirt with blue jeans and black sneakers. Hyiru has deep blue eyes that become dark and intense when he's angerd.
Personality:as said before calm,laid back Quiet carefree. Stands up for the weak. Can be a hot head at times. Feels that he should be able to do watever he wants. LOves adventure and a challenge at the same time. LOve talking to his PET.Also he's easily distracted by good looking girls. Can be stowic at times.
PETmods:His PET is black,white and blue.It has a DNA scan mod that is activated by Hyiru's voice or fingerprint. When activated it ejects a blacklight that scans the are for any trace of DNA that can't be seen with the regular eye.
Net Navi
Name: Lynx.exe
Gander:Male
Element:Normal
Type:Sword
Apperance: Lynx is a double blade navi that is black and white. He wears white and black gauntlets that allow him to handle his blades with out touching them.He also wears a hood during battle that shadows his face.The longer that match he's in goes on, the brighter red his eyes get. Lynx's hair is a bright red and is seen when the hood comes off.When he's not fighting he covers his body with a cloak that hides his blades that he throws off before a battle.
Personality: Funny,outgoing,Calm. Loves to play but gets serious when hes ready to fight. Lynx finds it fun to do things that piss Hyiru off. Lynx always has to comment on something and always has to get his word out. Doesn't like to lose but knows when he can't win. Loves to investigate and solve problems. Enjoys training and learning new things to use in battle.
Custom weapon: Dragon Blades
Sig Attack:Eclipse Blade funeral, Lynx throws his blade to grab the foe in the front of him then he does a cross slash over there chest , once that connectsit stuns the enemy giving him time to combine both Dragon blades into one. Lynx rapidly slashes the foe then step backs far enough to allow him to fire a giant wave of energy. It takes away 70 hp. 2 turn for cooldown
Lynx.exe
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Operator
Name: Hyiru Hien
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tall, light skin, wears a blue headband on his forehead that blows in the wind. Wears a long sleeve blue and white shirt with blue jeans and black sneakers.
Personality: Really calm, laid back, quiet, and carefree. He stands up for the weak, and he can be a hothead at times. He does anything he wants, and loves talking to his PET.
PET Mods:His PET is black, white and blue. Wears black and white gauntlets and carries two blades on it back. (Que?) It has a rewind ability that allows it to go back to something that previously happened in that area.
Net Navi
Name: Lynx.exe
Gender: Male
Element: Normal
Type: Sword
Appearance: Lynx is a double blade navi that is black and white. He wears white and black gauntlets that allow him to handle his blades. He also wears a hood during battle that shadows his face. The longer a match he's in goes on, the brighter red his eyes get.
Personality: Funny, outgoing, calm.
Custom weapon: Dragon Blades
Sig Attack: Eclipse Blade Funeral. Lynx throws his blade to grab the foe into the front row then he does a cross slash over there chest, once that connects he combines both Dragon blades into one. Lynx then rapidly slashes the foe, step backs one panel, and fires a giant wave of energy.
Woot, we got a newbie. GRAMMAR NAZI TIME. Bolded words are- okay, fuck it, that takes too much effort. Just compare the fixed version with your original post. You should be able to figure it out... I hope.
Aside from that...
Add more description to everything. More specifically, your navi's personality and your operator's description (Oh, he has no hair?).
Pet Mod = No. Remove EVERYTHING but the color changes.
We don't use panels. Aside from that, your sig attack needs Damage and a Cooldown. If you don't know what those are, you suck and you haven't read all the rules. Read them again please.
-Twi
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You still need more description. And how on earth do gauntlents have anything to do with a PET mod?
And your damage to cooldown ratio on your sig is wrong. 70DMG, 2TC.
And your damage to cooldown ratio on your sig is wrong. 70DMG, 2TC.
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Just go for what color it is. You could add a few slight changes to the actual structure. (I belive the original example is small wheels so the PET can move around thru small areas on it's own) but nothing that can give you any sort of mechanical advantage whatsoever, and weapons aren't allowed in the real world either.
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You're going to have to explain that better to us. What kind of DNA scanner, and what would it do? Identify people? Make it so that only your Operator can use his PET?
