Gale and bloody cross

Operator
Name:Gale Stormheart
Age:16
Gender:male
Appearance: thigh length white hair with crimson red tips pulled back in a braid stands six nothing wears a crimson trenchcoat over a black t-shirt with his navi's logo a blue cross on it wears black pants and combat boots wears a cowboy hat and has an eyepatch the eye that is uncovered is silver. Gale also wears a pair of leather driving gloves that look blood stained.
Personality: Gale is quite calm at times but tends to be a jerk in stressful situations he is also the kind of guy you can rely on at most times and when there's something in it for him
PET Modifications: a crimson color scheme with a blue cross on the back

NetNavi
Name:bloody cross EXE.
Gender:male
Element: Fire
Type: Sword
Appearance: Cross wears a black body suit under red armor the armor coners all but his joints and has a blue cross on the chest plate and on the back as well as on his gloves. He has floor length silver hair and his helmet consists of a crest on the forhead it also has a visor and openable mouthguard. When not in combat the visor is up and stowed in the helmet and the mouth guard is open revealing his full face and white eyes. Also when not in combat his sword and sheild are stored on his back
Personality:Cross is a cold hearted lne wolfish navi except when it comes to his friends then he'll do anything for them.
Custom Weapon: Cross Sword (a solid blade) and Bloody sheild (a blood red solid sheild usually on his back)
Signature Attack: world in flames causes flames to erupt from under the enemy does sixty damage and has a two turn cool down process
Hm.

You'll need a little more in the description department, and it'd be nice if you properly capitalized and punctuated everything.

I'll also need some stats on your sig attack. Standard starting stats are 60 damage with a 2 turn cooldown.
better?
Much better, but, I'd still like some more description.

Description shouldn't stop you from being able to play though, so, APPROVAL!

Get: Rageclaw, Cannon, Shotgun.
Get: Attack+1, Rapid+1, Charge+1, Undershirt.

All I ask is you add a bit more to the descriptions, and a grammar-check in Word wouldn't hurt, either. But in the meantime, go have fun.
roger sir thank you sir