Operator:
Name: Tyler
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Appearance: Tyler is pretty average looking, with no features that really stand out. His hair is light brown that is so short that you could almost say he's bald. He's not the most athletic person but isn't weak either. His height is about 5' 9'' so he is a little taller than most kids his age. He wears blue jeans and a green shirt, along with his watch on his left wrist and his blue cap. His sneakers are white. You could consider him an average 15 year old.
Personality: Tyler's personality is one people may call a little awkward. He has a very nice personality, but can easily be persuaded, usually by his NetNavi. He will never do anything mean like make fun of people or get angry at someone for doing something he disagrees with. When he thinks something is wrong or doesn't feel right, he'll try to keep it to himself and not say anything, but the look of distress on his face can easily be seen. When his NetNavi, family, or his friends are in danger, he will step up to the plate. He becomes a whole new person at this point. He will try as hard as he can to solve the problem even if it means using force. He may not be strong, but he can fight. He uses techniques he learned in karate when he was 10. Tyler's relationship with his family is good. The most important thing to him in the world is family, and will do anything for them.
PET Modifications: Tyler's Pet is Black with Grey Highlights. It has a red logo of a flame on the back.
NetNavi
Name: Pyre
Gender: Male
Element: Fire
Type: cursor
Appearence: He stands at a height of 5' 9''. His hair is a bit longer than Leon's at 1 inch and is blonde. He wears what a typical archer may wear. Being more of a stealthy kind of NetNavi, he wears a black cloth tied around his face(with little slits in the eyes so he can see) so no one can see his face. He has a dark gray (but not black) long-sleeved shirt. He wears the same color pants that fit him perfectly so he can move around freely without any disturbance due to his pants being to big or small. On the back of his shirt there is a rope and tied to the rope there's a quiver for his arrows. He has a gray belt that carries his bow for him when he isn't holding it. Finally, for his feet, he wears small, black shoes that almost seem like socks.
Personality: Pyre's personality is almost the complete opposite of Tyler's. He is a bit on the mean side. He is the type of person who will speak their mind even if it hurts the person's feelings. He is a very persuasive person too. He usually persuades Tyler into doing anything. Although it may seem like it, Pyre isn't an all around bad Navi. He works well with others as a leader, and is ready to defeat any virus that comes in his way. He is a very reliable Navi and one that anyone such as Tyler is lucky to come across.
Custom Weapon: A Bow and Arrows. He lights his arrows on fire before shooting them.
Signature Attack: The Wall of Inferno: He sends dozens of flaming arrows around the opponent he is facing which creates a wall of fire around the enemy. 70 fire damage. 2 turn cool down.
Everyone starts off with 0 zenny, 100 HP, a basic chipset of Cannon Shotgun and Rageclaw, and a basic navicust pack consisting of an Undershirt, Attack+1, Charge+1, and a Rapid+1.
Leon and Flare
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Mechanics-wise, you're looking fairly sound. The stun thing is a bit iffy, but other than that, looks okay to me.
Your descriptions are decent and moderately long, but the biggest problems I see is the names. Leon for the operator is taken by another member. One of the staff, as a matter of fact, by the same name. Also, Flare is too close to the canon character FlareMan, although he doesn't really resemble FlareMan, the name is close enough.
Your descriptions are decent and moderately long, but the biggest problems I see is the names. Leon for the operator is taken by another member. One of the staff, as a matter of fact, by the same name. Also, Flare is too close to the canon character FlareMan, although he doesn't really resemble FlareMan, the name is close enough.
