Desmond Nationality Issues

There's no Asia in the MMBN universe and therefore Desmond cannot be Asian. I need to fix this so here's his old profile:

Name: Desmond
NetNavi: Tennisman.EXE
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: 5'11 lightly tanned oriental-Asian with short, thick hair and glasses. Fairly muscular build.
Personality: Very extroverted and friendly. Somewhat stubborn when it comes to accomplishing his tasks. Not particularly clever and very frequently mixes up meanings of phrases and sometimes accidentally offends the people he's talking to because of misunderstandings. Gets frustrated easily but rarely lets his anger get the best of him. Enjoys gambling but enjoys tennis most of all.
PET Modifications: A red PET with a crisscrossing mesh of tennis racquet strings covering the screen. A layer of black leather is adhered to where your hand would normally grip the PET.




...And here's the new profile

Name: Desmond Suo
NetNavi: Tennisman.EXE
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Appearance: Desmond is of Choinese decent, approximately 5'11" with tanned skin. He has short, brushy hair and wears glasses with thin frames. He also has a fairly muscular build from regularly playing sports.
Personality: Though he comes from Choina, he carries no particular feelings of patriotism to his home country, preferring the Electopian way of life. Though very extroverted and friendly, Desmond is also somewhat stubborn once his mind is set. He is not particularly clever and frequently mixes up the meanings of common phrases. Due to this inadequacy, he regularly lets Tennisman take command when virus busting and only takes on the role of slotting in chips. He finds it more amusing to watch his navi battle than actually plan any strategies himself. On occasion, he does make his own decisions by sending chips that were not requested but usually only during desperate situations. Outside of his online life, Desmond enjoys many sports including soccer and volleyball but enjoys tennis most of all.
PET Modifications: A red PET with a crisscrossing mesh of tennis racquet strings covering the screen. A layer of black leather is adhered to where his hand would normally grip the PET.




There's not a lot that I changed. Mostly sentence structure and ethnic background

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Though he comes from Choina, Yumland


Uhh... Has he lived in both Choina and Yumland? The rest of the changes are fine, but I want to know if I'm just misreading you saying Choina is a city in Yumland. <__<
Alright, looks good now. Approved.