"It's showtime."
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Just a few things here:
- You need to register a NetOperator as well
- It may just be due to my current browser, but your registration appears to be a thin, tall tower of text, as if you hit enter after every dozen words or so.
- Your Navi's description, personality, and backstory are good... but you're basically describing "The Riddler" in Navi form. The green tux and hat, black mask covering his eyes, mysterious/eccentric criminal who uses riddles/mind tricks for petty crimes... it looks like a carbon copy to me. Canon characters are not allowed.
- We can address the sig attack system once you fix the above issues.
- You need to register a NetOperator as well
- It may just be due to my current browser, but your registration appears to be a thin, tall tower of text, as if you hit enter after every dozen words or so.
- Your Navi's description, personality, and backstory are good... but you're basically describing "The Riddler" in Navi form. The green tux and hat, black mask covering his eyes, mysterious/eccentric criminal who uses riddles/mind tricks for petty crimes... it looks like a carbon copy to me. Canon characters are not allowed.
- We can address the sig attack system once you fix the above issues.
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"- Your Navi's description, personality, and backstory are good... but you're basically describing "The Riddler" in Navi form. The green tux and hat, black mask covering his eyes, mysterious/eccentric criminal who uses riddles/mind tricks for petty crimes... it looks like a carbon copy to me. Canon characters are not allowed."
Uhm......o-ok.....I wasn't entirely sure who the riddler was until I searched him up after this rejection ._. ......And...I suppose it's a good reason to make me start over :/ .....I mean, I 100% made this up just the other night.... I didn't know I was slowly constructing a carbon copy ._. .....I know thats hard to believe and I don't plan on trying to prove it either.... I guess it's back to the drawing board then.... *Sigh* Sorry about that.
Uhm......o-ok.....I wasn't entirely sure who the riddler was until I searched him up after this rejection ._. ......And...I suppose it's a good reason to make me start over :/ .....I mean, I 100% made this up just the other night.... I didn't know I was slowly constructing a carbon copy ._. .....I know thats hard to believe and I don't plan on trying to prove it either.... I guess it's back to the drawing board then.... *Sigh* Sorry about that.