Salieo:So,this is your house?
Kaoru: Pretty nice,right?
Salieo:Yeah...where are your parents?
Kaoru: On a long vacation.
Salieo:Have you ever heard of me before?
Kaoru:No.You must be famous in this "Haro" place.
Salieo:I try to survive as much as I can.Ever since They took my Immortality and my god powers away.
Kaoru:You were Immortal?
Salieo:Yeah,WAS.This is NOW.I used my powers for silliness and evil,and They finally decided to take my powers away.Meaning I'm not longer Immortal.But I can still High Jump,Cyber Dash and use Sabers and swords like crazy.
Kaoru:You're cute for a...are you human?
Salieo:Half Varr,Half Neko.
Kaoru:It's just us alone for the next 24 hours.Are you hungry?
Salieo:No,I just ate at that cafe.
Kaoru:You wanna show me your existing abilities?
Salieo:Sure.
Kaoru:*Hops on his back*You seem strong.
Salieo:Super Strength....fading quickly...*Grunting*Human world...taking affect of me very quickly!
Kaoru:Try to hold out until we're done.
Salieo:I'll try.*Jumps off*Wait a minute,can't you fly?
Kaoru: Only in my transformed mode.But since you're carrying me,I don't need to transform.
Salieo:*Jumps from building to building*
Kaoru:I think you're starting to fly.
Salieo:Nonsense.*Levitates slightly*Son of a cheesecake!
Kaoru:You're starting to fly.
Salieo h no...
Kaoru:Try to jump up as high as you can and fly straight.
Salieo:Maximum point jump!*Jumps to farthest point*Too high!
Kaoru:Wow,you can jump THIS HIGH?
Salieo:I can't go but up to the ozone layer.
Kaoru:We're gonna die if we hit the earth.
Salieo:No we're not.
Kaoru:Try to fly.Think happy thoughts like a person who's annoying shutting up.
Salieo:*Meditates*Ommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm..
......
Kaoru:*Loses grip*SALIEO!
Salieo:Kaoru!*Gains the sudden ability to fly*
Kaoru:SALIEO,HELP ME!
Salieo:*Flies toward her and grabs her*Pretty impressive eh?
Kaoru:You saved me.
Salieo:*Loses the ability to fly due to fatigue*Son of a...*tries to stay awake*I can't...awake.
Kaoru:C'mon,you have to!
Salieo:*Tries to stay awake*We won't die.Hold on tight to me.Now,you've got to trust me.
Kaoru: Ok.
Salieo:I'm going to use Dragon Crash.
Kaoru:Sounds bad!
Salieo:Into the ocean.When I say now,you let go and you'll land like you're jumping in a pool.I'll probably be some feet under.
Kaoru: Ok,go ahead.
Salieo: Dragon CRASH!*Turns body into a meteor-like object*
Kaoru:Hot,Hot,hot!*Clothes burn up*
Salieo:NOW!
Kaoru:*Lets go and lands in water*
Salieo:*Makes a huge impact*
Kaoru:*Is hit by huge water blast*Why do i feel naked...?Oh my god.*Blushes*
Salieo:*Re-surfaces*Oh my GOD,we lived!
Kaoru:*Swims over to Salieo and hugs him*Your plan worked!I'd never thought I'd say this so early but...I love you.
Salieo: Prove it.
Kaoru:*Kisses him*
Salieo: (thinking):52 girls,I'm better than anyone!I love being a Varr!
to be continued....
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Salieo:THIS is your house?
Miyako: Pretty,right?
Salieo:It's perfect.It's clean!*Gets on knees*Clean I say,CLEAN!
Miyako:You're weird...
Salieo:Sorry.I get a little over eccentric when I get happy.
Miyako:C'mon,let me show you around,Salieo.
Salieo: Ok....
Miyako:This is the living room.*Shows him around the house*
Salieo: (thinking):At least there's been no spectral crawlers for the past day.I think they're planning something....Those reproducing filths.
Miyako:And that brings us to..my bedroom.
Salieo:Avo's blessing!Your room is the cleanest thing I've seen since my college dorm!
Miyako:*Closes and locks room door*Is there anything you want to do?
Salieo:Show me around this pathetic city called Tokyo.
Miyako: Ok,follow me!
Salieo:*Follows her*
Miyako:A lot of robberies have been going on in the past 3 days.So,watch your back for robbers.
Salieo:I'll blast them to smiths.*Hand glows from Dark Energy*I may have powers in Lavahorn state,but in Salieo state,i can only use a certain extent of my abilities.Hold onto me.We're going for a ride.
Miyako:*Holds onto Salieo*
Salieo:Can you handle speeds up to 110 mph?
Miyako:Yeah...I can try.
Salieo:Cyber Stance!Get ready for Cyber Dash!*Dashes while saying Cyber Dash*Cyber Dash!
Miyako:You're going above the speed limit!
Salieo:I go above EVERYTHING.
Miyako:What kind of weapons are these?
Salieo:Swords.One of a kind.The Sword of Shadows and The Masterful Greatblade.
Miyako:I've heard of those before...It's hard to believe you found them.
Salieo:Should I stop now?
Miyako:Yeah.
Salieo:*Stops*
Miyako: Phew.
Robber:Hey,freeze!
Salieo:*Pulls both swords out*You freeze,bitch!
Robber: Oh (Bleep),I'm (Bleeped)
Salieo:Now back up,put the gun down and get me 12 packs of Tropical Fruit bubble gum.
Miyako:And some skittles!Lots of skittles.
Robber:*Follows his order*
Salieo: Demanding gets you everywhere.
Robber:Uhh...here you go,master.
Salieo:That'll be all.*Kills him with both swords*
Miyako:Wow,you're right.Demanding rocks.
Salieo:But don't use it too much.It'll result in jail time.
Miyako:I haven't seen a spectral crawler in days,are they planning something?
Salieo:I don't know.Let's go.*Keeps speeding off chewing gum*
Miyako:I'm getting used to this.
Salieo:*Jumps in air across water to bridge and lands*
Miyako:Wow,you're a cool...what are you?
Salieo:Half Varr,Half Neko.
Miyako:A Varr?Aren't they dead?
Salieo:I was one of the lucky ones.
Miyako:I bet you were.*Blushes*
Salieo:You're blushing..that means you must love me.
Miyako:I do.You're too hot.*Kisses him*
Salieo: (Thinking):53.Heh heh,Salieo you are a beast.
Miyako:*Holds his hand*Wanna hold hands on the way home?
Salieo:Sure.
*Both walk off into the sunset*
Miyako:But first,let's go see the sunset.
Salieo: Ok!
*Both run off to the hills*
to be continued...
Miyako: Pretty,right?
Salieo:It's perfect.It's clean!*Gets on knees*Clean I say,CLEAN!
Miyako:You're weird...
Salieo:Sorry.I get a little over eccentric when I get happy.
Miyako:C'mon,let me show you around,Salieo.
Salieo: Ok....
Miyako:This is the living room.*Shows him around the house*
Salieo: (thinking):At least there's been no spectral crawlers for the past day.I think they're planning something....Those reproducing filths.
Miyako:And that brings us to..my bedroom.
Salieo:Avo's blessing!Your room is the cleanest thing I've seen since my college dorm!
Miyako:*Closes and locks room door*Is there anything you want to do?
Salieo:Show me around this pathetic city called Tokyo.
Miyako: Ok,follow me!
Salieo:*Follows her*
Miyako:A lot of robberies have been going on in the past 3 days.So,watch your back for robbers.
Salieo:I'll blast them to smiths.*Hand glows from Dark Energy*I may have powers in Lavahorn state,but in Salieo state,i can only use a certain extent of my abilities.Hold onto me.We're going for a ride.
Miyako:*Holds onto Salieo*
Salieo:Can you handle speeds up to 110 mph?
Miyako:Yeah...I can try.
Salieo:Cyber Stance!Get ready for Cyber Dash!*Dashes while saying Cyber Dash*Cyber Dash!
Miyako:You're going above the speed limit!
Salieo:I go above EVERYTHING.
Miyako:What kind of weapons are these?
Salieo:Swords.One of a kind.The Sword of Shadows and The Masterful Greatblade.
Miyako:I've heard of those before...It's hard to believe you found them.
Salieo:Should I stop now?
Miyako:Yeah.
Salieo:*Stops*
Miyako: Phew.
Robber:Hey,freeze!
Salieo:*Pulls both swords out*You freeze,bitch!
Robber: Oh (Bleep),I'm (Bleeped)
Salieo:Now back up,put the gun down and get me 12 packs of Tropical Fruit bubble gum.
Miyako:And some skittles!Lots of skittles.
Robber:*Follows his order*
Salieo: Demanding gets you everywhere.
Robber:Uhh...here you go,master.
Salieo:That'll be all.*Kills him with both swords*
Miyako:Wow,you're right.Demanding rocks.
Salieo:But don't use it too much.It'll result in jail time.
Miyako:I haven't seen a spectral crawler in days,are they planning something?
Salieo:I don't know.Let's go.*Keeps speeding off chewing gum*
Miyako:I'm getting used to this.
Salieo:*Jumps in air across water to bridge and lands*
Miyako:Wow,you're a cool...what are you?
Salieo:Half Varr,Half Neko.
Miyako:A Varr?Aren't they dead?
Salieo:I was one of the lucky ones.
Miyako:I bet you were.*Blushes*
Salieo:You're blushing..that means you must love me.
Miyako:I do.You're too hot.*Kisses him*
Salieo: (Thinking):53.Heh heh,Salieo you are a beast.
Miyako:*Holds his hand*Wanna hold hands on the way home?
Salieo:Sure.
*Both walk off into the sunset*
Miyako:But first,let's go see the sunset.
Salieo: Ok!
*Both run off to the hills*
to be continued...
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Sorry, buddy. I might be able to revamp Darkfall, but this is just too much. Don't expect me to come to the rescue here.
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I'm in college,I get numerous ideas.I've been doing this script writing since the 2nd grade.
My first character was a test.Read the name and see if it was too nooby.
Arcane Bishop III
My first character was a test.Read the name and see if it was too nooby.
Arcane Bishop III
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I've been writing fiction for three years, and I'm a college studaent, and I write much better thant his, without raping anybody's fandom.
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So?I'm in college,you're in college we're even.
I've been at it longer than you.2nd grade.
Arcane Bishop I was my kindergarten idea.
I've been at it longer than you.2nd grade.
Arcane Bishop I was my kindergarten idea.
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Darkrai, even ages is not even skill.
Longer time does not mean more skill.
You can remember ideas from kindergarten? Why use them?
Darkrai, even ages is not even skill.
Longer time does not mean more skill.
You can remember ideas from kindergarten? Why use them?
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Because Darkfail will be a hit TV show,you dolt.
No, just no. Not even the people who like South Park would watch that.
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First off...
The makers behind SP have admitted on various accounts that the series is based off of the generic children's show format (no, not Power Rangers or Spongebob, we're talking Barney, Sesame Street, etc) as an homage to how their careers began, and give off subtle humor by use of the juxiposition of the show-style and the often mature moral lessons they recap on at the end. Just saying that if you meant people that watch SP are retarded or otherwise foolish for doing so, that the statement isn't entirely true.
...Anywho, that said, I fail to see the hook this would offer as a show, and rather than bother with reasoning with any of this, I'll simply say that, were this made onto television, the legal disputes it would bring about would be very entertaining, and at least then the fifteen minutes of fame are met. Moving on, if Feuxnix (
) can make this into something worth any true use, I'll cut a lock of my hair and send it to him.
...I really don't think there's any more to say other than that arrogance typically comes from but two kinds of people: those attempting to hide their faults, and those locked in a perpetual state of delusion of grandeur, and I feel sorry for those under either demographic. Thank you, and good day...
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No, just no. Not even the people who like South Park would watch that.
The makers behind SP have admitted on various accounts that the series is based off of the generic children's show format (no, not Power Rangers or Spongebob, we're talking Barney, Sesame Street, etc) as an homage to how their careers began, and give off subtle humor by use of the juxiposition of the show-style and the often mature moral lessons they recap on at the end. Just saying that if you meant people that watch SP are retarded or otherwise foolish for doing so, that the statement isn't entirely true.
...Anywho, that said, I fail to see the hook this would offer as a show, and rather than bother with reasoning with any of this, I'll simply say that, were this made onto television, the legal disputes it would bring about would be very entertaining, and at least then the fifteen minutes of fame are met. Moving on, if Feuxnix (
) can make this into something worth any true use, I'll cut a lock of my hair and send it to him....I really don't think there's any more to say other than that arrogance typically comes from but two kinds of people: those attempting to hide their faults, and those locked in a perpetual state of delusion of grandeur, and I feel sorry for those under either demographic. Thank you, and good day...
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That's not much better. And you're not American? Hah, and they say the Americanschool system is failing. Look at this guy. Twelve year old Americans on this board write better than him! And he has the nerve to call us stupid.