Hello all, for years I have been trying to get a satisfactory sprite for my navi Vortex.exe and finally said "to hell with it, I'm making my own" (this is of course after countless attempts to get other people to do the work for me).

please keep in mind that this is my first attempt at such an enterprise...




Belive me...I could do with some constructive critisism.

Vortex appeared in a flash of silver light and looked around, or at least he turned his head from side to side, his blindfold appeared to abstruct his vision but in reality it was just to hide his eyes. He could see fine and no one would be any the wiser.

He walked towards the center of the square trying to spot a good busting partner. After he reached the center of the square he stopped and waited for a suitable navi to appear...

Storm awoke with a loud grunt "huh!" and checked his watch it was 3:00 in the afternoon. He streached and stood up "well better head home and check out the net square". He walked off in the direction of his house, yawning periodicaly, and eventualy got home. But as soon as he closed the door to his house, he seemed to become a different person, his eyes shined brightly, he seemed infused with some new energy as though he had just downed an energy drink. "Next stop net square!" he roared and he bounded up the strairs, two at a time, and closed his door with a snap.

"I can't belive that I have been Persuaded to do this" Storm mumbled as he walked towards the park, "I mean really Vortex, we just moved here and you expect me to go to a park and then hope that some person will pop up and..."

He was cut off by a voice issuing from his PET, "As a matter of fact Storm" Vortex said, "Just because you were and outcast where we used to live doesn't mean that you can't make friends here!"

"I suppose your right, but..." again he was cut off.

"No if's and's or but's Storm, besides it will do you some good to get to know the people around here. And if your lucky we might even get to help someone bust some viruses!"

By then they had reached the park and Storm sat down on a bench. And waited for someone to show.

"Vortex"

"Yes Storm?"

"Maybe your right, I could use a friend...and a partner."

And he waited for someone to appear.

Operator
Name: Xavier Storm

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance: Storm sports a black trenchcoat along with black cargo pants and a black shirt. He also wears a headset that he keeps pluged into his PET for communication with his Navi, Vortex. His skin is rather pale and has black ruffled hair. His eyes are ice blue.

Personality: Storm generaly avoids contact with others due to the fact that he is social outcast to begin with. Ever since high school he has spent most of his life on the net...though most of the time he has been on harmless errands for his few friends...he secretly has been training his navi Vortex in the art of net battling ever since he was 10. He "has a knack for computers" as he puts it and therefore was considerd a complete geek in high school. Vortex provides him with emotional support and advice, and he provides Vortex with battle chips...it all works out.

PET Modifications: Is black in color and has a headset jack.

NetNavi
Name: Vortex.exe

Gender: Male

Element: Normal

Type: Sword

Appearance: Vortex wears a black blindfold and has silver spikey hair which is coverd by a black helmet with a headset attached. His shirt and pants are silver with black acents and wears enormous black pauldrons with small silver spikes on them which he occasionally uses to ram his foes with. Under his blidfold his eyes are crimson. He also wears a silver cape which (should the need arise) can transform into a pair of silver wings.

Personality: Vortex, despite his apperence, is very friendly and loves to make new friends. In battle he is very focused and despite his heavy apperence is very light on his feet...but he didn't sacrifice speed for power. As a matter of fact, he is slower than the average net battling navi, but is more powerfull than most. He is very protective of his friends and if they are in trouble he will go to any lengths to get them out.

Custom Weapon: Vortex Blades

Signature Attack: Abbysal Slash - vortex releases a large amount of energy and focuses it into his blades then he makes a slashing motion sending a large shockwave twords his enemies. 60 damage, 2 turn cooldown.