bumped?

Only my second Fan so don't be very hard.

Intro and time setting:This story is set after Lan discovers the Zoanaroids and several months after cybeast Gregar was deleted...Dr. Froid's son has risen to take his place and scientists around the world were still trying to find a quicker way to delete other than Colonel...

Part 1.Chapter:1

Nihilus walked around the white area. He was very bored and wondered when this test would end. He wondered if there were other navis like him.Nihilus was very tall and bulky, he was white all over and had several blue veins running around his body. He had a blue visor and a large antenna on his helmet.He was of average build yet, was as gentle (to other navis) as the PeaceProgs he was stored with. A shudder ran through his body and he looked over his shoulder, his virus-protection program let him know if he was in an infected area. Sure enough, 5 Swordys were rushing at him. Nihilus, thoroughly prepared, raised his right arm and shot out a solitary blue laser at one of them.He instantly pixelized and Nihilus continued to fire. 30 seconds later the lights dimmed and he was back in his PeT. "See? He destroys viruses. He's not one of them",said Tarugachi. Tarugachi Hiroteshi was a middle aged man who carried himself with an aura of greatness.His was a bit wobbly but he still packed a lot of muscle, he wasn't very tall though and like to avoid fighting. "We still don't know Taru", an older man said. "He could go unstable, and if we sell him to millions of people, who knows the chaos he would cause if he fell apart", another said.
"What will it take to prove to you that he is stable?!" Tarugachi roared. "We have spent 3 years developing a navi that will delete viruses, and once we have! You don't want to use him!" "Taru",one of the younger ones said,"There are just too many "What-ifs". What if? He is sold to systems everywhere, and then he goes unstable.What if? He gets let into weapons systems and goes unstable? We would be the ones blamed! and I don't want to be blamed for one man's idea." The young man said. Tarugachi stared at the floor and sighed. "I have a child at home, I wanted to finish this project as fast as possible." He said and sighed again, "Very well, let us start anew." The scientists then got back to work...

Chapter:2
A large amount of heel navis were gathered at undernet zero. "Hmmm, a lot more than I expected", a black navi mused. "Oh well, the more soldiers, the more units we can capture." The navi waited for a minute and looked over at a progress monitor. "Just on schedule." the navi said with a smile. "It seems I was right to keep that ONB alive. He provided very useful information." The navi said with a smirk. The navi went in front of the group and shouted,"Who may stand before the Sons of Anak!"
It was showtime. Every single navi started warping to another location in the undernet...In undernet four 10 ONB were carrying a small shred of data in an encrypted e-mail. It was impertant that they get this data to the inner sanctum. All at once a flashbomb3 rolled next to the right half of the ONB and the whole mission went to hell.

Chapter:3
"Dr. Hikari! Dr. Hikari!" a young man shouted while looking at a monitor. "What is it Froid?" Lan's father finally asked. "We have a large force obliterating our troops!" The young man said. "Dr. Hikari merely smiled and said in an easy tone,"Just wait Froid. Even if they obliterate the case, the mission has already been a success." "Ye-yes Sir." Dr. Froid jr. sputtered. They watched on screen as several heel navis assualted the ONB with several long-range weapons. After the last ONB was logged out, the navis decended on the case. "Activate the transmission." Dr. Hikari's smile turned to a frown as he said this. "Activating....now!" another scientist said. In the undernet. "Hey I think this thing is rigged!" a red,white and blue heel navi said."Oh c'mon! it's probably your Capitalism sensor my friend. We get in, make boom, get out. The perfect idea of capitalism" "You don't even know what capitalism is you idiot!" the navi shouted. " I just saw this light flicker on", he said gesturing at a yellow light gently pulsing on the underside. "Hmmm, I don't think I saw this before." A different heel said. "There's only one way to find out then," a tall navi said to the rest. "Scan-Prog-Friendly-Unit!" The navi started to glow and his eyes sweeped across the case. They were trying to ping us!" the navi shouted. "Well get a load of this!" His arm morphed until a large sword appeared, this sword,however had a number of scars. The navi sliced the case open and destroyed the transmitter. "Log out!" he snarled, "I wanna see how team 2's doing"....

Chapter:3
A long ways away in Kotobuki net 3.... "Heh, from the sounds of it, team bravo has succeded." A tall ONB said. "Now let's just hope they don't find out." Another said. The ONB started marching again towards a warp square not that far away. "Heh, easy pickings", a black heel navi stated while looking through a scope at the procession of ONB. The heel navis were perched on top of a bridge and were waiting until the ambush point. "I'm fed up with waiting!" one purple heel navi said. "Shut up Pablo! I don't want you screwing this up! this is the last shipment!" The black one said. Seconds later the ONB went under the bridge. "Now!" The Heel navis jumped down and began slashing with swords. The support units attacked at a majority of the ONB with machguns blazing. In Sci-lab..."Sir!" Dr.Froid jr. shouted looking at his monitor, "Alpha team is being attacked!" "Tell them to push the units through the warp! If we do that then they can jack out." Dr. Hikari said immediatly punching in some numbers into a control panel nearby. In Koto area civilians were immediatly jacked out as more ONB started to pour in. "Retreat!" The leader navi said as he deflected a blast with his darksword. All at once the heel navis started pushing towards the ONB with regained vigor. Several of the black heels started pulling out Drkbombs and even darkspreaders. Several minutes of this intense battle raged on as ONB were deleted with alarming frequency. "Dr. Hikari! we have gotten all the units into the warp! Sending retreat order...now!" Dr.Froid (Jr) said as he typed out the command. Seconds later in Koto 3 every ONB jacked out. The rest were backed up and sent to "Advanced Net War:What to do". Dr.Hikari sighed with relief." I've just received an e-mail from Cain, seems he received them." he said with a smile on his face. "So mission success?" a young lady asked. "We don't know that" Dr.Hikari said, his face growing more sober."This has been the 7 attack this year. If this continues, we may have to stop sending them to Cain.For now", he said his face growing a smile,"Let's celebrate!" He said, throwing his arms in the air.

http://z4.invisionfree.com/Team_of_Serenad...dex.php?act=idx

Team of Serenade project, you can find out what we are doing. If you find the way into the (non)secured area. We are and are in need of some life potions. XD

Jaden walked into a store where he jacked in. He made sure to go to the area mike was last seen.

Pulseman jacked in
"Hello, brother, took me while to find you." Pulseman looked over at the viruses. "Can I help?"

NetNavi

Name:Pulseman
Gender:male
Element: Elec
Type: N/A
Appearance:(this is an old photo (*points to 3 spikes*) user posted imageof medium height, he has 2 big spikes on his back.He is of average build with the exception of his huge fists. He has emerald eyes and is very light for his appearance.His head is somewhat cylindrical and slowly curves inward, in short, the top of his head is a lightning rod. His feet are quite small near his crotch but his lower legs are armored. His entire body chassis is yellow and orange.
Personality:He is usually silent but when he talks, he talks with solemn wisdom
Custom Weapon:Pulse Fist:Launches huge fists at enemy.
Signature Attack: Sig atk: Pulse :This shoots an electric powered soundwave that can hit one or 2 targets. if it hits 2 targets. it does 35 points of elec type damage to the opponent. If 1 target, then it deals 70 points of elec damage. this attack has a 2 turn cooldown.

Operator:
Name:James Wheeler
Age: 15
Gender:male
Appearance:user posted image Tall, thin, and slightly tan, his hair is jet-black and hangs down from his face covering his left eye. He like to wear faded jeans, a T-shirt, and a light green jacket with yellow trim. The shoes he wears are made of magno metal and can stick to thick metal surfaces.The sad thing about him is that no one knows what he can do. He can only bench 80 so people assume he is very weak, but is very good at writing and likes to compose stories as well as create art on with his PeT. He is the brother of Everret Wheeler.
Personality:Easy,outgoing.
PET Modifications: Yellow color with green trim and also carries MSPaint.exe

good?

edited

*sigh* Oh well.