Subplot Aid

Alright, I am finally starting to piece together my subplot for Runeknight, but I'd like some input. If you guys could go over the two bosses listed and give me some comments. I'll add the other three's info when I get it down.
Glad to help. I'm actually typing up my subplot right now. Although I expect that compared to EN's, its gonna be laughably short. Although my four (maybe a fifth if I can finally decide) bosses, plus the ally Navi I made do seem pretty kickass in my eyes. Three pages average for each bio, with Arial Font, Size 12.

Finished looking the two over. Both look absolutely fantastic, and I'd like to suggest names for Inanna, but I don't know what kind of a name you're looking for.