name:raito
age:14
gender:male
apperance:Raito has brown hair and green eyes.He a green shirt with a model ZX logo on it.He also wears blue jeans.
personality:Raito has a kind personality.He is kind and friendly to others,plus he loves to netbattle.But he has a bad attitude and short temper.
PET modifications:Raito PET is green and red.It has a model ZX logo on the bottom of the screen.In the back it has kanji for"love" and "hate"
netnavi:Zero EXE
gender:Male
element:normal
type:sword
description:zero's head armor has a blue crystal and has red,black armor.Plus on he wears a small red jacket and red and black armor on his body.He has green eyes and long yellow hair(bascally he looks like zero in megaman zero)
personality:he is kind and talented at slicing with his sword.He is determined and fool around alot.
custom weapon:(Z-saber)a green saber that is used to slice zero's enemies.
signature attack:(Mutiple Z-saber slash)It allows zero to slash his enemies mutiple times.
Raito and Zero EXE
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No no no no no no.
Please, please go and read the rules. They're important. They clearly state that you're not allowed to make reference to any kind of pre-existing character in any kind of media. That includes characters from video games.
Now, as for the rest of it...
Please, please go and read the rules. They're important. They clearly state that you're not allowed to make reference to any kind of pre-existing character in any kind of media. That includes characters from video games.
Now, as for the rest of it...
- Add more description to all of your fields; that means more physical description, more personality, and more description in the Signature Attack.
[li]Spellcheck is your best friend. Run your entire profile through it and fix it up so that the spelling and grammar are better.
[li]I sense that 'model ZX' is referencing a Rockman game of the same title. Remember, no references of that nature to anything in the modern media!
[li]Fix up your Navi's name, physical description, and custom weapon to reflect the fact that everything in your registration must be original.
[li]Please include a damage total and a cooldown period in your Signature Attack. (The typical damage and cooldown for a first-level SigAtk is 70 damage with a 2-turn cooldown.)